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Broken Heart: chapter 1

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chapter 1: a lovely date gone wrong


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I was so psyched! It was our 2nd year dating, and today was the anniversary of the day we first kissed! To celebrate, we were going over to the most expensive, fancy restaurant in all of town; we both had saved up all our money just to go to it. We, literally, had to work in order to get the money. Lucas had to clean apartments while I had to babysit after school.

I had no idea what dress to wear; “Hmm…red dress…no…aha,” I shouted to myself while searching around in my closet for the perfect dress. I chose the black dress with white sleeves, and I wore black knee socks along with cute black sandals; It was the perfect dress for the perfect day, but I wasn’t wearing it just for the night; I was wearing it for the whole school day.

I’ll never forget the day Lucas and I met; we met our freshmen year, and we both had the exact same classes. I was a little depressed that year, because I missed my best friends who went to different schools. He saw me crying in the rain, and he had comforted me. It turned out we had some similarities; we loved sweets, like candy and cakes, and we both really enjoyed pop music by the same authors…those were the two we really had alike, but it was still a great loving relationship. How do I know? He never left my side.

As I was daydreaming about Lucas, I nearly missed the bus if it hadn’t been for mom pushing me out the door right when it arrived at our house. Everyone was startled to see me in a dress on a school day, but I didn’t let it bother me; today was our anniversary, and I wasn’t going to let anything ruin it!

Lucas met me in front of the school right after I got off the bus, and I squealed as I ran to him, hugging him tightly. He smiled brightly as he hugged me back, but something about him seemed odd. He wasn’t… very happy as he used to be.

“I’m so psyched about tonight!”

“I can tell; you’re already in your dress. I really think you should’ve waited until tonight, Marylyn. You don’t want you dress to be ruined.”

“Ah, it doesn’t matter, does it?”

“…I guess not.”

I stopped hugging him, then looked him deeply into his beautiful black eyes. “Are you alright, Luke?”

“I’m perfect, why?”

“…you seem kind of upset.”

“Why would I be upset when I’m already happy to be with you?”

suddenly the bell rang, and everyone was in a hurry to get to class, including Lucas and I.

“Luke,” I shouted,”I’ll see you tonight!”


The rest of the school day was boring, as usual, but it didn’t seem so bad the fact that I had a dress on and I was noticed a lot by my friends. one of my fewer friends, Tomas, even noticed me in a dress. I never really talked to him much, but we talk every now and then when we can (in fact, I wouldn’t even call him my friend; just an acquaintance) . I met him in one of my classes our 1st year.

“I guess you’re off somewhere special,” He told me right after he noticed me in my dress.

“Yup; i’m going out on an anniversary dinner with Lucas,” I told him, smiling shyly. He knew who Lucas was… but I knew he wasn’t too comfortable about me being around him. I never knew why, though; he never tells me why he’s uncomfortable with me around him.

“Just… be careful around him, okay?”

“I will, Tom; you really need to relax! I’ve been with him for 2 years now, and I really think you should trust him.”

“…I’ll try,” were the last two words he spoke to me that day.


It was cold that night, and the weatherman said there was going to be a slight chance of rain. “Well, I can’t let that ruin my night,” I spoke to myself while approaching the restaurant. I sat in the waiting room, waiting for Lucas to come, but 15 minutes seemed like forever. However, his hot, black suit and tie made me feel better. the lady up front then took us to our seats.

Surprisingly, Lucas was quiet; absolutely quiet the whole time. I tried to talk to him, but he would only nod or shake his head, trying to keep himself occupied by stirring a spoon in his glass of wine. Eventually, he started talking to me… but little did I know it was going to be a serious conversation.

“Marylyn… I… I know we’ve been together for 2 years now, and…”

I knew what he was gonna ask me; he was gonna ask me to marry him!

“YES,” I shouted, hugging hum tightly, causing the whole room to grow into an awkward silence. I blushed deeply, returning back to my seat.

He coughed before speaking. “No… I wasn’t going to ask you that.”

“S-Sorry,” I stuttered.

He sighed before speaking. “Actually, Marylyn… I-I…I’ve met this girl…”

wait- girl? what girl!? Is..is he dumping me?

“And, well…” he continued, “I really like her.”

“W-Wait a minute, Luke - you’re supposed to be with me!”

“But, Marylyn… she’s-she’s incredible! She’s beautiful and we both have a lot alike!”

that one hit me hard in the chest. He thought this girl was more beautiful than me… “A-Are you saying… B-But, L-Luke, you’re supposed to be with me! ‘Together Forever’, rem-remember,” I stuttered. I could feel the tears forming in my eyes.

“Marylyn, you don’t understand…”

Then, he said something to me I never thought he would ever say to me.




“I don’t want to be with you anymore.”
NOTE: NONE OF THE CHAPTERS IN THE STORY HAVE ACTUALLY HAPPENED TO ME

I just got the idea after seeing a REALLY sad movie Cry forever 
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